Readers, myself included don't like cookie cutter, cardboard cutouts
as characters. If a character is boring or not dysfunctional enough,
I'm putting the book down.
As a writer I
learned that the more layers a character has, the better your audience
receives the character. That character's bio doesn't have to be
explained in detail in the book, but it may be something you want to
keep in the back of you head as you're writing.
What's their
favorite food? What are their hobbies? What was their relationship with
their parents? Do they have tattoos? Did they serve in the military?
What type of movies do they like? Who's their best friend? Where did
they grow up? Do they have money? If so how much?
The
answers to all those questions and everything else you can dream up for
your character will influence every challenge they have to face, just
like what you faced in the past affects who you are today.
For example, our main character in The Body Hunters,
Danielle Labouleaux or Danny as she prefers to be called is biracial
and grew up in New Orleans where she had a somewhat antagonistic
relationship with her parents in her teens and early twenties. She was
bullied as a child, not only for being biracial and also for a zipper
scar that bisects her chest from heart surgery when she was six. She has
a penchant for hot rods, especially her candy apple red Camaro, named
Lucille. She loves to cook, which she learned from her Grandmere and she
hangs on to friends for dear life because they were few and far between
during her childhood. She also has a thing for buff, tattooed bad boys,
who are really diamonds in the rough.
This
is how we started our main characters and as Danielle's story
progressed, we added layers and layers of back story, fleshing her out
as a character. Before long we knew what she'd say and how she'd react
in any given situation.
The same technique can be used for the universe your characters exist in. It's your universe, you make it up and mold it any way you want to.
Is it post apocalyptic? If so how did it get that way? Who's the President? Is this the future? What happened twenty years ago?
The more believable your story and character are, the more invested your readers become in your story.
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Wednesday, November 27, 2013
Building Your Mythology
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Friday, November 22, 2013
The Villain Must Pay
There's a lot of injustice in the world. All you have to do is turn
on the news and here about someone being victimized. As we all know,
sometimes the punishment doesn't fit the crime. How many times have we
seen someone get a slap on the wrist for some heinous crime that's left
someone badly hurt, emotionally scarred or even dead?
I once read a book that started out promising. It was a good read, up until the end when the antagonist got away with his misdeeds. The two main characters were coerced into letting him get away with a slap on the wrist. I still hold a grudge against that author for that ending. Although it may not realistic when it comes to the real world, people want to see justice rendered, especially when they're invested in a story.
As a writer, it's something I take into consideration. Maybe it's some form of vigilantism, but I personally want the bad guy to suffer and I know our readers feel the same way. Even though the antagonist is nothing but a combination of ones and zeroes in my computer, I want them to get what's coming to them. Sometimes getting carted off to jail won't do it, sometimes the punishment has to be extreme to satisfy the reader. Sometimes for the punishment you have to think outside the box. It's Raven Newcastle's world and she can do what she wants.
If only things in real life were so simple.
I once read a book that started out promising. It was a good read, up until the end when the antagonist got away with his misdeeds. The two main characters were coerced into letting him get away with a slap on the wrist. I still hold a grudge against that author for that ending. Although it may not realistic when it comes to the real world, people want to see justice rendered, especially when they're invested in a story.
As a writer, it's something I take into consideration. Maybe it's some form of vigilantism, but I personally want the bad guy to suffer and I know our readers feel the same way. Even though the antagonist is nothing but a combination of ones and zeroes in my computer, I want them to get what's coming to them. Sometimes getting carted off to jail won't do it, sometimes the punishment has to be extreme to satisfy the reader. Sometimes for the punishment you have to think outside the box. It's Raven Newcastle's world and she can do what she wants.
If only things in real life were so simple.
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Tuesday, September 24, 2013
It Ain't Easy
If you talk to anyone who blazed a new trail or started their own
business, they'll tell you how hard they had to work to get it off the
ground. They can tell you stories about the nights where they got little
sleep or the ulcers they got while working to make their dream a
reality. Having your own business is certainly not for the lazy or the
faint of heart. Doing your own thing is hard.
My writing buddy and I have been on this journey for over a year; starting working on our first novel June of 2012, since that time we've released two projects with a third being edited right now and the fourth currently being written with a script for Amazon Studios also in the works. Not too soon after we started our endeavor, we discovered that the writing is the easy part.
One can not simply put their book on Amazon and wish it to sell, you've gotta hustle. Along with our day jobs, we have to write, and find time in our schedules to tweet, network, and blog. There are never enough hours in the day and any time you spend with trivial things can be time better spent building our brand.
Like crumbs to a starving person, we get our little signs that we're headed in the right direction. Maybe while out in about we'll see the exact make, model, and color car one of our character drives or maybe we'll one across someone with the same name living in the same location that our characters are from. Or happen to be driving behind someone with a vanity plate that says 'Author'. We don't see these as coincidences, but as mile markers on our journey.
The challenges one faces while working their dreams are there to weed out the weak from the strong. Nobody ever said pursuing your dream would be easy; ask the people who've been through it. If you keep your eyes on the prize than it will be yours. One day this will all pay off, until then we'll just keep blogging, networking, and tweeting.
My writing buddy and I have been on this journey for over a year; starting working on our first novel June of 2012, since that time we've released two projects with a third being edited right now and the fourth currently being written with a script for Amazon Studios also in the works. Not too soon after we started our endeavor, we discovered that the writing is the easy part.
One can not simply put their book on Amazon and wish it to sell, you've gotta hustle. Along with our day jobs, we have to write, and find time in our schedules to tweet, network, and blog. There are never enough hours in the day and any time you spend with trivial things can be time better spent building our brand.
Like crumbs to a starving person, we get our little signs that we're headed in the right direction. Maybe while out in about we'll see the exact make, model, and color car one of our character drives or maybe we'll one across someone with the same name living in the same location that our characters are from. Or happen to be driving behind someone with a vanity plate that says 'Author'. We don't see these as coincidences, but as mile markers on our journey.
The challenges one faces while working their dreams are there to weed out the weak from the strong. Nobody ever said pursuing your dream would be easy; ask the people who've been through it. If you keep your eyes on the prize than it will be yours. One day this will all pay off, until then we'll just keep blogging, networking, and tweeting.
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