The other night there was an especially upsetting episode of Sons of
Anarchy. A person close to the main character, Jax, was killed off in an
extremely brutal fashion. If you’re not familiar with the show, it
centers around an outlaw biker gang and all the devious deeds they do.
The show is supposedly an adaptation of Hamlet, where the biker club
stands in for the kingdom.
Though in any other story he would be
the villain, Jax’s character could be described as an antihero; a
popular term for a bad guy we want to root for. During the six years the
series has been running, we’ve seen Jax commit multiple murders, hurt
people and even inject his son’s mother with drugs so she would have no
hope in getting custody of him. Even though he commits these crimes, he
claims to be a devoted husband and father to his two young sons who may
be destined to repeat his mistakes. The viewer is supposed to sympathize
with Jax, despite the heinous things he does because he is the center
of the show.
Early in the episode he was warned by one of his
friends that the troubles he may be having in his personal life, may be
the result of his evil deeds in the past. Jax is shocked by this
revelation. Why would his past deeds reflect on his current situation?
Needless to say, the death of his loved one is the direct result of
seeds he'd sown earlier in the season. What he did in the past
eventually caught up to him, costing a woman her life.
Though it
may be just a tv show, this is actually a situation I've seen over and
over in real life. How many times have we seen the news story about the
husband who kills the wife so he could be with his mistress and thinks
he should get away with murder? Or the nutcase who makes it her point to
go after another woman's husband? How many people do we hear of lying,
cheating, and stealing to get what they want no matter the cost? They
have the attitude that they're entitled to the happily ever after.
The
thing that surprises me is their genuine shock when God comes to
collect or karma comes back to slap them in the face. Did you really
think you could do all this damage and you wouldn't pay for it? Even
people who do everything right and treat everyone kindly have trials in
their lives.
Be careful what you do because it just might come back to bite you.
Showing posts with label Revenge. Show all posts
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Friday, December 13, 2013
Saturday, November 9, 2013
Femme Fatale
Enjoy this short story!
The
leggy blond sauntered down the long staircase one carefully measured
step at a time. Angelique Leone the iconic bombshell with the curvaceous
silhouette and come hither pout that adorned many soldiers walls, was
in her third day of shooting. She was headlining in her second motion
picture for Sandstone pictures of a four movie deal contract. The studio
had pumped a ton of money into the flick and even more money into her
glamorization makeover. Angelique Leone’s name on her birth certificate
which was stashed discreetly away in her father’s safe in Texas, was Jane Lenny;
not exactly a top billing box office name.
She
arrived in Hollywood at twenty years of age with ten dollars in her
pocket and a prayer to land any kind of studio contract until a friend
in the business revealed to her the real game. It was a hard lesson and
one Jane wasn’t happy to learn. Crying alone in her small rundown
apartment after losing her virginity to a fat balding casting director
on the proverbial casting couch, she contemplated suicide. Returning
home would only garner her shame for her actions.
The
call came that evening just moments before she was ready to swallow a
handful of pills with the joyous news of a studio contract. Apparently
the casting director liked her ‘audition’ and recommended her for a
small role in a new movie. If the camera agreed with her she would be
considered for a larger role in the next one. The meeting she had with
the movie’s director the next morning would change her life forever,
1940 was going to be her year. The first thing he did was give her a
new name, a name that would soon be synonymous with sultry sensuality
and unbridled sex, a name that went before a team of studio execs to be
decided upon and a name she was not allowed to have a choice in
deciding.
“Cut!”
the grumpy red faced director Ronald Sizemore yelled. “Damn it! Who’s
to dumb fuck that put this stupid plant at the bottom of the stairs? Get
it out of here.” He kicked the fake potted plants over. “Everybody take
five!”
Angelique
threw her hands up in the air and marched down the stairs. “How many
times are we going to do this? My feet are tired!” She flipped her long
platinum blond hair from her shoulders.
The 6’2” stoutly director glared at her. “You’ll do it as many times as I want you to. Don’t forget your place!”
Her place was becoming one of more influence thanks to her overnight
meteoric rise in celebrity and he knew it. He hated the idea that this
shy little Texan girl was learning how to wrestle control in a male
dominated industry.
“I’m going to lie down. I’ll be in my dressing room alone.” She emphasized loudly.
“Lay off the pills today.” He barked back. His brown eyes angrily dared her to disobey.
She
turned on her heel sashaying off the set and into the early afternoon
sun. Donning her sunglasses she made her way across the studio lot and
hopped on a golf cart heading to her private oasis, the dressing room she
demanded without hesitation as her star power started to shine. It was a
dangerous game of wills and she knew it. The studio machine had the
power to make or break her if she didn’t play her cards right, a heady
position for a twenty two year old who gained a lifetime of wisdom in
the eighteen months since that fateful audition.
Her dressing room was decorated in all pinks, every shade available was
represented. From the deep pink special ordered carpeting to the
bubblegum lampshades. She hated pink. Angelique was simply sticking it
to the studio for what she considered rape by the fat, nasty smelling
casting director. The temporary dressing room cost about as much as a
new car to redecorate. Ironically the more she misbehaved the more her
star power grew.
The
public loved her. Young ladies longed to be her. Men self fulfilled
their sexual fantasies against the backdrop of her half naked pinups.
The attention her small role in that first movie garnered her was a
Hollywood dream. A well placed one liner catch phrase with fantastic
lighting of her pouty full lips and she became America’s new sweetheart.
It had even taken the studio execs by surprise. No one was more
surprised than the demanding narcissistic director Ronald Sizemore who
had hoped she would be another young girl in his stable of bevy beauties
he could call upon for licentious scenery and behind the scenes sex. He
assumed she was an innocent kitten he could use and abuse till she was
washed up.
Angelique
proved to be tougher than she looked given in part to her hard scrabble
upbringing in the vast expanse of her father’s Texas ranch. Not to mention his
liberal use of a belt for discipline. Her brothers fared worse under
his tutelage of hard farm work and beatings, both boys leaving his tyranny as soon as they came
of age. She was the only one left at home when his second wife also
made an escape. Frightened to stay knowing she would be an easy target
for his drunken anger, she boarded a bus and headed to L.A. with a
promise of fame and easy fortune.
Frantic
knocking on her dressing room door woke her from her slumber. Wrapping
her silk dressing gown around her she opened the door to reveal two LAPD
officers.
“Sorry to disturb you ma’am. We need you to come with us.” The tall uniformed officer said.
“What is the meaning of this?” She demanded.
Officer
Brady responded. “Ronald Sizemore is dead. Please get dressed and come
with us or we will be forced to take you like this.” The officer looked
her up and down lecherously grinning.
She stumbled back and fell into her lounge chair. “Dead? But how?”
“That’s what we want you to tell us.”
The
squad car pulled up in front of the station with its siren blaring,
someone had already tipped off the newspapers and fan rags as light
bulbs flashed incessantly blinding her even with her sunglasses on.
Officer Brady roughly grabbed her arm from the back of the black and
white dragging her away from the throng of cameras and reporters calling
out her name.
She was seated
in a hard wooden chair in a lonely room, her silk scarf still wrapped
around her head and neck. She pulled a cigarette and holder from her
purse. “Can I please get a light?” She yelled, aware that they were
watching her from behind the two way mirror. Detective Jarden entered
with his lighter in hand. Sitting himself across from her he lit her
cigarette as she crossed her legs allowing her skirt to rise up enough
to tantalize him. It didn’t go unnoticed.
“Am I under arrest?” she asked.
“No.” he replied.
“Do I need a lawyer?”
“Depends, did you shoot him?” He licked his lips as she adjusted the hem on her knee.
She raised a perfectly plucked eyebrow at him. “Up until now I didn’t even know how he died, how could have I shot him?”
Detective
Jarden snickered pushing an ashtray her way. “You were seen having
words with Mr. Sizemore before he died and it’s been rumored you had a
beef with him. Do you own a gun Ms. Leone?”
“Of course, a single girl has to protect herself in this big bad city, but that doesn’t make me a killer.”
“You’re
right, but what about the argument? You had words with him and then
disappeared.” He lit his own cigarette and placed his fedora on the
table next to his notebook.
“Ronald
was a hard man to work for detective. He made many questionable demands
and berated the staff constantly, doesn’t mean I wanted him dead. He
had enough enemies for that.”
“But he is dead. Can you account for your whereabouts after one o’clock?”
Angelique
sighed. She knew where this was headed. She had verbally threatened to
shoot Ronald if he ever touched her again several weeks before. He
didn’t like to be told no so he had punched her in the face daring her
to complain, promising to ruin her if she didn’t comply with his
demands. The bruises took days to disappear putting the movie shoot
seriously behind schedule. The studio attributed it to the press as Ms.
Leone’s ongoing bought with the flu.
“I was in my dressing room napping.” She advised curtly.
Sitting
back in his chair unbuttoning his suit coat, Detective Jarden gave her a
sly smile. “Napping? Was there anyone with you?”
She glowered in contempt. “No, I was alone the whole time.”
“Too bad, no one to corroborate your story.” He said tapping his ash in the tray.
“You also have no proof it was me. I know my rights detective, I demand you let me leave.”
“You also have no proof it was me. I know my rights detective, I demand you let me leave.”
Detective
Jarden snapped his fingers and the two officers who brought her in
appeared. “Take Ms. Leone home please.” He told them. “I’ll be in touch.” He said as she walked away.
Angelique
took her constantly ringing phone off the hook, dressed herself in a
silk floral nightgown and poured herself a drink. It
had gone as planned. That jackass would never force himself on her
again. The back alley abortion he had forced her to have that nearly killed
her was listed as another bout of illness by the studio. Her son had laid in
pieces on a crude table next to the coat hanger used to destroy him and
she vowed then to kill the man who did this to her. She held the evening’s
paper in her hands reading the headline. ANGELIQUE LEONE QUESTIONED IN DIRECTORS DEATH! Even bad publicity was good publicity.
She
closed her eyes reliving her day. He had appeared in her dressing room
ready for another romp. The whole scene on the set of overturned flowers
and anger at the staff to call a break was planned by him so he could
get her alone. They had done this dance before and she knew her steps
well, he had seen to that with his repeated threats and punishments. He
showed up to her dressing room fifteen minutes after her departure as to
not arouse suspicion. Three knocks on the door was his signal it was
him. She opened the door holding a handkerchief as a sign to the
unseen men hovering around the corner hallway. George and John Lenny,
her older brothers, gagged and bound Ronald dragging him to a waiting
car behind her dressing room taking him back to the empty set. The
always punctual catering truck took care of any set crew that lingered
behind. The studio paid free food was always a sure fire guarantee to
draw a crowd.
Her
brothers had slipped him in the back entrance unnoticed amid the props and
various scenery's. Unbinding their victim and removing his gag, she gave him only
one command. “Run.” She said as she raised her hand pulling the
trigger. No one would have paid attention to the shot thanks to the
noisy western they were filming in the next sound stage. Her aim was as
good as any man’s her father had made sure of that. It was after all a necessary
skill if you lived on a Texas ranch.
The
bullet landed squarely in the back of Ronald’s head and exited out the
front taking half his skull with it. Her brothers stealthily slipped her
back to her dressing room and in mere minutes were driving out of town
with the fired pistol.
“Ms.
Leone, Ms. Leone, how does it feel to be cleared of all murder
charges?” the hapless reporter pestered her on her way to the red carpet
premiere of her new movie ‘Femme Fatale’.
She
stopped and turned in her red dress designed just for her movie
premiere placing her hand on her ample hip with a big toothy smile. “Darlings,
was there ever any doubt!”
Monday, August 12, 2013
How Much is Too Much?
Last week while in the midst of writing the third book of The Body Hunters Series we had the discussion of how far we really wanted to delve into our mythology. Though our series is about a pair of detectives with extraordinary abilities which they use to solve mysteries; at its heart our story is about two unique people working together while trying to sort out the difficulties of their relationship. What we had in mind was creative and would have made for an interesting story, but was it so far into paranormal mythology that it would turn off the readers?
As an example we referenced the HBO series True Blood. Though I'm late getting into the series, starting halfway through Season 5, the common complaint I hear about it is that they got too convoluted. People miss the earlier episodes when it was a scandalous supernatural tale about who hooked up with whom. I can say the same about a show I enjoyed during its first season ABC's Revenge. The first season was simple; a young woman with a list of names going after the people who wronged her. The second season of Revenge was too far removed from the simple concepts of season one. I gave up watching halfway through and to date have yet to even watch the second season finale.
Keeping these lessons in mind, we decided to scale back on the storyline we were planning. Though the storyline is still present, it's not an all encompassing plot like we originally planned.
While it would have been a compelling story with deeper supernatural elements, we listen to our readers first and foremost. Though our superfans enjoy the paranormal activity that brings our characters together, the thing they enjoy the most is the human connections and relationships. We don't want to alienate our readers by introducing concepts that are too out there. So using these TV shows as examples of what happens when you don't give your fans what they want, we decided to ramp up the drama and a little boom-chica for good measure.
As an example we referenced the HBO series True Blood. Though I'm late getting into the series, starting halfway through Season 5, the common complaint I hear about it is that they got too convoluted. People miss the earlier episodes when it was a scandalous supernatural tale about who hooked up with whom. I can say the same about a show I enjoyed during its first season ABC's Revenge. The first season was simple; a young woman with a list of names going after the people who wronged her. The second season of Revenge was too far removed from the simple concepts of season one. I gave up watching halfway through and to date have yet to even watch the second season finale.
Keeping these lessons in mind, we decided to scale back on the storyline we were planning. Though the storyline is still present, it's not an all encompassing plot like we originally planned.
While it would have been a compelling story with deeper supernatural elements, we listen to our readers first and foremost. Though our superfans enjoy the paranormal activity that brings our characters together, the thing they enjoy the most is the human connections and relationships. We don't want to alienate our readers by introducing concepts that are too out there. So using these TV shows as examples of what happens when you don't give your fans what they want, we decided to ramp up the drama and a little boom-chica for good measure.
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