Enjoy a sneak peek at the first chapter in the third book in The Body Hunters series.
Alistair
Brogan’s eyelids cracked open a little after one in the
morning. Through sheer stubbornness he continued to lay there, willing
himself to fall back to sleep. After nearly an hour of watching the
digital digits on his alarm clock mark the passing time, Alistair gave
it up. At the moment sleep wasn’t going to allow him to escape the mess
of his creation.
He forced himself to sit up. He
ran a hand through his tousled grey hair, which stood straight up like
muddy icicles. The space in the king size bed beside him was empty; a
few blond hairs on the pillow the only trace of the high priced call
girl with whom he’d spent part of the evening. Obviously his meter had
run out and she’d gone off in pursuit of the next paying client.
Alistair winced as the soles of his feet touched the frigid bedroom
floor, the wood cut from some rare tree from the Amazon. He slipped
into a pair of handcrafted silk slippers, monogrammed with his
initials. He was considering not even bothering with a shower, until
his own body funk assailed him.
Alistair
shuffled to the bathroom with its heated tile floors, his worries heavy
on his shoulders. He gazed at his nude form in the bathroom mirror.
He didn’t look too bad for a chap well beyond the half century mark.
His eye sight had been corrected with laser surgery so he no longer
required the grandfatherly glasses he used to wear. His hair was
expertly cut by a stylist known to have clipped the hairs of U.S.
Presidents and heads of state. His fingers pinched his waist, finding
no trace of the love handles that had plagued him for years, his belly
flat and taut like a fashion model half his age. His unforgiving
personal trainer had seen to that and the man’s exorbitant fee had been
money well spent.
A personal shopper made sure
that his walk in closet was overflowing with fine garments and shoes
that befitted a man of his wealth and stature. A fleet of fine
automobiles filled the garage of his mansion, while a handful of
servants waited on his every beck and call. When Alistair talked,
people paid attention. Everywhere he went people knew him and wanted
to be around him. To the outside world Alistair Brogan was the picture
of power and influence, but why did he feel so hollow inside?
When
Alistair looked at himself in the mirror all he saw was staring back
at him was the face of a con man and a thief. Alistair Brogan, CEO of
Capital Securities Associates or C.S.A. was guilty of running a Ponzi
scheme. He’d duped corporations, charities, middle class workers, and
little old ladies out of billions of dollars. Over the years, he kept
telling himself that he’d go on the straight and narrow and clean up the
mess he’d started, but as the years went by he only got deeper and
deeper in the tar pit of his own making.
Just a few months
ago, Alistair had developed a plan that would allow him to pay off all
his investors back in full. The plan would take time to pay off,
precious time he no longer had. Unfortunately, there was no more sand
in his hour glass and two weeks ago the whole house of cards came
crashing down.
A legion of FBI agents in their
windbreakers descended on C.S.A.’s headquarters in Savannah in search
of a paper trail. The SEC had been investigating him for years and
finally had gathered enough evidence for a warrant. Like buzzards
swooping down on a carcass, the media was all over the story. Cameras
and microphones were shoved into the faces of clueless C.S.A. employees
and Alistair’s equally clueless friends and family.
Alistair
was exiled from his circle of friends as soon as the news broke. He’d
gone from a VIP to the most hated man in America in mere days. His
victims now paraded outside the gate of his mansion with their torches
and pitchforks, calling for the head of the monster. His former friends
treated him like he was poisonous, avoiding any contact with him.
Alistair felt like he didn’t have an ally in the world.
The
arraignment was mercifully quick and his hot shot lawyer was able to
get Alistair released on bond and put on house arrest. Thankfully he
was able to avoid wearing one of those awful tethers, since the lawyer
negotiated the surrender of his passports. Alistair was now confined to
his luxurious seven bed room, Savannah, Georgia mansion. With the
house empty since he fired his staff, the mansion was even more like a
prison. Save for the occasional call girl, Alistair was in solitary
confinement with no other human contact.
As he
stood in the shower letting the steaming jets of nearly scalding water
work over his exhausted muscles, Alistair reminisced over his past
transgressions and his pitiful existence.
He’d
never been much of a husband or father. He knew now that he was never
worthy of his first wife, his one true love, Cindy Good. She was truly a
saint who’d put up with his lying and cheating for years, but even
saints have their limitations. She’d taken their children and had been
living happily ever after for years.
Wife number
two was a conniving temptress who was only after his money. She’d
abandoned him as soon as she’d gotten word of the charges against him
and the possibility of losing everything of which she’d grown
accustomed.
The disappointment in his eldest
son’s face whenever he looked at him was enough to kill him. It was a
wonder that Alistair Jr. didn’t change his name to avoid all
association with his fallen father. Luckily he was spared the judgment
of his daughter who lived in Europe with her husband and children. It
was one thing to be a bad father, another to be publicly branded a
crook.
How ironic that the one child he could truly
lean on at this time was his problem child, his youngest son Carl, by
his second wife. It was Carl, the former drug addict, who comforted
Alistair with words of wisdom and encouragement. While he was never
charged with anything as serious as running a Ponzi scheme, Carl had
seen the inside of a jail cell on several occasions in his relatively
short life and knew what they were up against.
Ceasing
the ruminations on his children and turning off the punishing spray of
water using the digital touch screen panel, Alistair stepped out of
the glass enclosed shower. The scent of his musky imported body wash
and shampoo lingered on his skin. Donning just his silk bathrobe, he
headed downstairs, taking in the things he’d accumulated over the
years.
As he passed the baby grand piano in the
living room, he reminisced on the items he’d acquired. There was the
antique Persian rug he’d acquired in Morocco, the antique vase from
Malaysia, a collection of hand blown glass ornaments from Italy. These
items he cherished would soon be auctioned to the highest bidder to
cover the losses that his clientele had suffered because of his
schemes. His bank accounts were already frozen and it was only a
matter of time before his property was seized.
His
breath caught in his throat as if he could feel the walls of justice
closing in on him. His lawyer insisted on pleading not guilty, but
Alistair knew that his days were numbered. He was guilty as sin and he
was going to spend the rest of his earthly existence and part of the
afterlife in a federal prison.
Trying to shake
off the stress, Alistair arrived at the room containing his indoor
pool. The combination of the chlorine and the heated water made the
room hot and the air hard to breathe. Shrugging out of his robe, he
stepped into the warm waters. He swam laps around the pool until his
arms and legs felt like they’d been injected with lead. The dull pain
helped to lower his anxiety level.
“Nice day for a swim, huh?” A masked figure dressed in black emerged from the shadows, a gun gleaming in its hand.
“Wh-who are you?” In near panic, Alistair quickly cinched the robe around his waist.
The intruder never answered, letting the sound of the gunshot speak for
him. A jet of red black blood sprayed like a fountain from Alistair’s
perfectly tanned neck. He fell to his knees, his hands around his own
throat, desperately attempting to stop the bleeding as his life flowed
through his fingers. Alistair’s voice was replaced by thick garbled
static, the blood in his throat nearly gagging him.
The
dark figure stood less than a foot from Alistair’s crouching form and
pulled the trigger again. Grey matter and blood spatter made a mess of
the white tile. Alistair collapsed in a heap. Death overrode any
modesty as his robe fell open, leaving his naked body fully exposed.
The intruder fired two more rounds into Alistair’s skull before kicking
the dead man into the pool.
A murky red cloud
surrounded Alistair as he floated on top of the water like an overfed
goldfish. Satisfied with their handiwork, the intruder fled the room,
carefully avoiding the blood on the floor.
Showing posts with label supernatural. Show all posts
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Monday, November 4, 2013
Friday, November 1, 2013
Susan Tepes-Ghost Therapist
Susan Tepes arrived home after a long day of shooting her reality show ‘The Ghost Therapist’. She hated the name, but for the money they were paying her she could have cared less what they called it. Flicking on the lights to her spacious L.A. apartment, she realized she was not alone. From the corner of the room a vase flew past her, aimed at her head. It ricocheted off the wall behind her. After having just about all her dishes and vases broken by angry spirits, she only used plastic ones “Missed me!” She yelled.
A large roar filled the empty space and her body was slammed into the living room wall. His body pinned her with his icy breath chilling her neck sending shivers down her spine. Sometimes being a contact psychic was a harrowing. She could touch the spirits and they could touch her, a fact that many deceased male predators relished and sought out those like her for that reason. The chose not to show himself to her, but she could feel his hands sliding down her body and his engorged ethereal member press into her hips.
“Not today” She said out loud. His growling rang in her ears as he punched her in the stomach. “Stop it!” She commanded as he knocked to her knees. Reaching blindly at the space in front of her she felt his energy and pulled. A thud reverberated throughout her apartment. “Show yourself now!”
“You don’t tell me what to do! I tell you!” His voice distorted with each word.
Placing her hands on her temples she pushed back on his energy force causing shock waves to reveal his teenaged form to her. He was barely sixteen from the looks of him. “You’re just a kid!”
“I’m man enough!” He roared back. “Just ask my many girlfriends.”
Susan walked to her kitchen grabbing a stick of sage from the counter. “You mean the women you raped?”
“They asked for it.”
She continued her questioning, lighting the sage. “How did you die?”
Still leering at her he lifted off the ground and flew forward stopping in mid air as the smoke from the sage hit his ghostly form. “What the fuck is that?”
She smiled, continuing to wave the smoke in circles around him. “Sage. It will make you tell me the truth and keep you from harming me.”
“Bitch!” He barked.
She ignored the insult. “Tell me your name.”
“Joseph.”
“Joseph what?”
“Joseph Kirby.” He spat on her.
“That’s gross!” She said wiped the ectoplasm off her face with a towel. She shoved his form over to a chair at her dining table.
“Ghosts don’t need to sit stupid.”
“That’s true but I do. I see you acknowledge you’re a ghost so we are halfway there.”
“Halfway to what?”
“Moving you on Joseph. So first things first, tell me how you died.” She said placing herself across from him at the table.
He materialized fully in front of her. “I shot myself, you wanna see?” He turned and parted his hair to show her the massive exit wound in the back of his head where his skull should have been, bloody brain matter hung out of the hole. “I stuck the pistol right in my mouth and pulled. My brains splattered everywhere, I can imagine my bitch mother having to pick pieces of my skull and brain out of the rug.” He laughed with an evil twinkle in his ghostly eye.
“Hmm. That’s a pretty violent ending, Suicide actually tells me you must have felt guilt over what you’ve done.” She commented.”That will work in your favor.”
His angry stare failed to move her. He waved his hand, slamming her cabinet doors in a telekinetic fit. “Why aren’t you scared?”
“Don’t make me relight this sage.” She said. “Don’t you think I’ve seen this for years? You’re not the first one to come to me. Ask yourself Joseph, why were you drawn to me?”
“I…I don’t know I just found myself here.” His eyes downcast he stopped the door slamming.
“You found yourself here because today is November 1st, The Day of the Dead and even though you can’t see them, there are five others in this apartment waiting patiently for me to attend to them.”
“There are?” He looked around not seeing any other specters. “You’re lying I don’t see anyone else.”
“You don’t because of your guilt and how you died. Joseph, the loneliness that you feel is part of your punishment to get you to repent. You have to accept your guilt, show remorse and move on.”
“Move on to hell you mean? No!”
Susan removed herself from the table walking towards her bedroom with Joseph following close behind.
“Yeah this is more like it! Time to get busy.” He tried to grab her but felt a shock that sent pain through his energy making him kneel to the floor.
“Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you the sage acts as positive energy to your negative energy, it also puts a shield around me. You can’t touch me till it wears off and by then you’ll be long gone.” She smiled and grabbed a large antique book from her nightstand.
“It’s a little late to save me.” He said meekly.
“It’s not for you it’s for your victims. I have to forgive you in their stead then you can move on to the next plane. Joseph don’t you wonder why you didn’t immediately go to hell? Why you are still here?” She returned to the kitchen table opening the large book.
“I guess I didn’t think about it.” He peered over her shoulder. “I thought this was a bible?”
“It’s a different type of book that’s been in my family for centuries. I have our family bible too don’t worry. ”
“What language is that?”
Susan swatted him away. “Romanian, now sit down.”
He did as he was told. She ran her fingers down the old text page after page until she found the words she was looking for. Reading aloud she recited the foreign words, once she finished they sat in silence for a second.
“What did you say?” He asked.
Susan sighed taking on a pensive look. “I asked the elders to search your victim’s heart to see if they are open to forgiving you.”
“Well? What happens now?”
“We wait, if the answer is yes then you are forgiven, in the meantime I want to read to you from the book of Matthew passage 6: 14-15 and 1 John 1:9, the last one I’ll read is Acts 3:19 about repenting which even though your actions say different I can tell you want to. Open your heart to it Joseph and accept the words.”
As she read the passages his ethereal form started to disappear. “What’s happening to me?” His frightened face started to fade.
“It’s okay Joseph, just accept the embrace.”
“Am I going to hell?” He asked in a child like voice.
Smiling sweetly she answered. “No, you’re going to the next plane where you have to finish the lessons you needed to learn here before you cut your life short and accept what you have done. It’s a good place don’t worry, once you finish your lessons you’ll move on to what we call heaven and be ready to accept God’s love and forgiveness.”
“I’m scared.” He whispered as his form was now almost a wisp of smoke.
“I know Joseph, Look in front of you do you see a man?”
“Yes.”
“He is an elder and will lead you on your path, trust him he is there to assist you till your ready for heaven. Goodbye Joseph.”
“Thank you.” She faintly heard from afar.
Loud banging rattled her doors jolting her from her chair.
“I know you’re in there you hippie freak, open up!”
Rolling her eyes Susan adjusted her tie dyed bohemian skirt and for fun wrapped a matching scarf around her head in a turban. “Yes Mr. Armstrong” She addressed her heavyset, balding neighbor. “Come for a reading? Let me get my crystal ball.”
“Listen I don’t care if you are the Ghost Doctor….”
“Ghost Therapist.” She corrected.
“I don’t care if you’re the fucking ghost proctologist! I’m warning you for the last time to stop burning that damned weed, it’s stinking up the building!” He yelled, veins road mapping on his forehead.
Susan looked beyond him and nodded. “Your grandmother wants me to tell you to lay off the potato chips and soda. You’re heading for a heart attack.”
He huffed as he walked away. “Tell the old bat to mind her own fucking business.”
Susan rolled her eyes at him and shut her door. Turning to the ethereal crowd in her living room she sighed. “Next.”
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Saturday, October 26, 2013
Danielle's Halloween
Here's a fun treat. This is a prequel of sorts to the yet unpublished third book in The Body Hunters series. Call it a Halloween treat! Enjoy!
“I promise honey, this is going to be the best Halloween/Slumber/Birthday party ever.” Danny’s mother, Julianna happily announced as she hung the Happy Birthday banner.
“I promise honey, this is going to be the best Halloween/Slumber/Birthday party ever.” Danny’s mother, Julianna happily announced as she hung the Happy Birthday banner.
The
Labouleaux family’s living room had been set up as party central with
everything a six year old little girl could want at their party; every
six year old girl except Danielle Labouleaux. Danielle or Danny as she
preferred did not understand the need for all the hoopla surrounding her
birthday. She’d practically begged her mother not to invite any of
girls in Danny’s first grade class other than her two best friends.
“Not it’s not!” Danny protested. “The other girls in my class hate me.”
Julianna
beamed a smile down on the daughter who was her spitting image, except
for her golden eyes and golden complexion which was inherited from her
father. “Honey, they don’t hate you. They just haven’t taken the time to
get to know you. That’s what this party is about; getting to know your
classmates and making friends.”
“Whatever.”
Seeing that her mother still wasn’t listening to her, Danny stalked off
in search of the candy she’d been forbidden to eat.
Danny
was different, she knew that. First and foremost, she was psychic, able
to communicate with ‘ghosties’ as her Grandmere called them. That fact
was a secret that only she and Grandmere shared. Her grandmother warned
that Danny would become a powerful psychic, because she was chosen to be
born on November 1st, or what was called The Day of the
Dead. The Day of the Dead was when the veil being the living world and
the spirit realm was lifted. On that day, Danny would be a beacon for
those ghosts who craved attention and wanted to pester her with their
selfish requests. As she got older, the ghosts’ would be more and more
demanding for her
attention.
Danny
also had a stronger connection to the spirit realm than most psychics,
even those born on November 1st. Just a few months ago, she underwent
emergency surgery to correct a heart defect. While she was on the
operating table, the doctors lost Danny for several minutes before they
were able to revive her. This phenomenon deepened her connection to the
spirit plane.
Unlike
the kids at the school whose parents were either both white or both
black, Danny’s father was black and her mother was white. She first
noticed that her parents were different during Open House when the
school year first started. Though her parents didn’t seem to be aware of
it, Danny saw the stares and the whispers from the other parents. She
put it in the back of her mind, until the kids in her class started to
tease her about her parents, calling her an Oreo.
After
punching her classmate Jasmine’s lights out on the playground, Danny
went home with the question of why they would call her a cookie. Her
father, Marcel Labouleaux lovingly pulled her into his lap as he and her
mother told her the fairy tale of how she came into being.
They
explained how her mother, the beautiful, violet eyed princess, defied
the wishes of her rich family and eloped with the handsome Creole man
she’d fallen in love with. Much to the young couple’s delight, Julianna
had a bun in the oven. When Danny asked how her mother got the bun in
the oven, Marcel quickly changed the subject, recommending that she not
get into any more fights.
“It’s getting late, Danny. Go upstairs and put on your costume.” Her mother advised. “Your guests will be arriving soon.”
“But mom!” Danny protested.
“Do
what your mom said.” Marcel commanded in his booming voice, just
walking in from the market with refreshments for their overnight guests.
Rolling her eyes, Danny made a point of stomping up the stairs as loudly as possible. She’d be glad when this night was over.
The
costume she’d picked out was draped across her bed. It’d been a
knockdown drag out brawl, but Julianna finally relented and let Danny
pick out her own costume.
No
frilly pink princess costume for Danielle Labouleaux. She knew that she
wanted to be a superhero, but not Wonder Woman or Supergirl like the
girls in her class. Danny wanted to be a superhero that looked like her,
so she showed her mother of picture of Storm from the X-men cartoon.
Proud
of her selection, Danny put the white wig over her dark hair and hopped
into the black jumpsuit with the matching cape. Liking what she saw in
the mirror, she started hopping on her bed, the black cape billowing
around her.
“Danielle! Your guests are starting to arrive!” Julianna called from downstairs.
Exhaling
sharply, Danny slowly descended the staircase, meeting the familiar and
friendly faces of her friends, Emma and Felicia. Emma was a white girl
with dark brown hair pulled into pigtails. Felicia was a black girl with
freckles and braids. Emma’s costume was a bloody zombie princess, while
Felicia was disguised as a glamour girl, with a tiara and feather boa.
They
squealed and giggled like little girls do, frolicking through the
house. The three best friends played to their heart’s content, until the
five invited girls from their class started to file in with their
blankets and sleeping bags. Fresh from an evening of trick or treating,
they were still in costume.
Julianna,
ever the gracious hostess whether the guest were young or old, had
plenty of Halloween treats and activities planned for the girls. The
party went well, with Danny’s classmates enthusiastic about the
Halloween games. The girls’ nastiness toward Danny was temporarily
forgotten as they stuffed their faces, danced to silly songs and
competed for Halloween themed prizes.
After
the festivities were over, the living room was set up as the girls’
campsite with an assortment of kid friendly Halloween movies playing on
the television. The girls changed out of their costumes and into their
pajamas.
Tammy, the alpha dog of Danny’s tormentors at school pointed at her as she buttoned the top of her pajamas.
“Look!
The Oreo is about to turn into Frankenstein!” Tammy’s horde of flunkies
giggled as Danny hastily finished buttoning her top.
The
zipper scar that bisected her chest was what remained after Danny’s
life saving surgery. Getting teased about it was almost a daily ritual
at school. She’d been following her father and Grandmere’s advice about
using her words, not her fists, but she was nearing a breaking point.
“Leave me alone!” Danny shouted back.
“Oh,
Frankenstein gonna cry.” Tammy mocked, bringing her balled up fists to
her eyes. “Wah, wah, wah. Crybaby! Are the Oreo’s tears made of cream
filling?”
The other girls laughed at the amateur comedienne.
“I said knock it off!” The infamous Labouleaux temper was ready to break free.
“Oreo! Oreo! Oreo!” The girls in Tammy’s clique chanted.
“How
about you take your heart out so we can see it, Frankenstein?” Tammy
jabbed again with her sharp words and her pointy finger into Danny’s
chest.
She
pounced on Tammy like a jungle cat. The assault took the bully by
surprise as Danny pummeled her from one end of the living room to the
other. The pink Barbie play tent Marcel had erected so the girls could
pretend they were camping collapsed under the weight of the grappling
duo. The other girls screamed trying to get out of the way for fear of
being the next victim of Danny’s fury.
Having
heard the girls chanting ‘Oreo’, Marcel and Julianna were already on
the way to the living room, knowing there was trouble. Expecting to find
their daughter outnumbered and in need of a rescue, they were stunned
to find her holding her own.
“Take it back.” Danny growled, slapping Tammy’s reddened cheeks.
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry I called you an Oreo!” Tammy wailed.
Despite
his urging his daughter not to fight, Marcel felt a little fatherly
pride that she’d given the bully exactly what she was looking for. He
pulled Danny off Tammy and into his arms.
“Enough, Danny, enough.”
“I tried to use my words, but I couldn’t help it.” She sobbed, tears falling on his neck. “They wouldn’t stop calling me names.”
“I know, sweetie, Daddy knows.”
Julianna
turned her motherly rage on the five instigators. “Is this how your
parents taught you to behave? You come to Danny’s house, eat her food,
play her games, and you mistreat her? What kind of spoiled brats are
you?”
Danny’s enemies flinched under Julianna’s glare, muttering apologies.
Danny
was still clinging to Marcel’s neck. “I’m about to start calling their
parents because I’m about one minute from whupping their behinds
myself.”
One after another, Marcel called the parents, pulling no punches about their children’s racially charged behavior. Upon
their arrival, some of the parents tried to defend their children’s
antics, blaming Danny, but Felicia and Emma were there to provide their
eyewitness account of events. The parents then went from defensive to
super apologetic.
“You
know racism is learned in the home. It’s a shame that kids pick that up
from their parents.” Marcel remarked dryly to one mortified mother, who
hastily dragged her towheaded daughter out the door.
“So
I guess the next thing is to wake up with a cross burning on my lawn.”
He matter-of-factly stated to a humiliated couple as they whisked their
daughter away.
“Give me that candy!” Marcel snatched a bag of treats from one girl on her way out the door with her shame faced mother.
After
the antagonists were gone, Marcel left to take Emma and Felicia home.
He’d already called their parents, who expressed concern for Danny.
Marcel thanked them for their worries and let them know he’d be dropping
the girls off shortly. Before leaving, they gave Danny a supportive
hug.
“Are you mad at me, mama?” Danny asked as Julianna tucked her into bed.
“Mad at you? Why would I be mad at you?”
“I ruined the party.”
Julianna
sighed, sitting beside her on the bed. “I’m not mad at you. Who I’m mad
at are those atrocious little snots and their equally atrocious
parents!”
Danny giggled at her mother’s version of harsh language.
“I can never be mad at you, my love. Now go to sleep, sweet dreams.” Julianna kissed her on the forehead.
“That’s horrible.” Cassie cried out as Danny continued her tale.
It
was over twenty years after that fateful birthday and the two best
friends were sitting across the kitchen table from each other. It felt
like a lifetime had passed since then, Danny’s parents and her Grandmere
lost to her over the years. The now adult Danny went to the coffeemaker
for the carafe and refilled their mugs.
“Dad was pissed. He was so aggravated with the situation that he joined the PTA.”
“Why would he join the PTA? What would that have to do with anything?” Cassie flipped her blond hair over her shoulder.
“He
joined the PTA so he could have an excuse to see those girls’ parents
every few weeks.” She laughed. “My dad was very ornery and he couldn’t
resist an opportunity to make those parents feel even worse.”
Cassie joined in the laughter. “What about Tammy and her goons?”
“I
never had problems with bullies after that. They didn’t even cause me
any problems in high school, so I guess they learned their lesson.”
“I
know I learned mine.” Cassie and Danny weren’t always friends in fact
they started off as bitter enemies. Having been the recipient of a
Danielle Labouleaux beat down, she didn’t blame the bullies for not
bothering her again.
“You know I’m still sorry about that.” Danny said remorsefully.
“I
don’t know why. I was acting like a stuck up biotch and I deserved it.”
Cassie acknowledged. “I still don’t understand why you don’t want to
have a birthday party. So what if you had to beat up Tammy?”
“Like
I said my birthday being on The Day of the Dead leaves me vulnerable.
After that ruckus during the slumber party, I fell asleep and woke up to
dozens of ghosts reaching out to me.”
“Yikes!”
“Exactly.
Dealing with my gift is hard sometimes, even as an adult; imagine
turning seven years old and having ghosts fighting for your attention. I
woke up screaming and luckily Grandmere was there to calm me down. On
my birthday, spirits are drawn to my raw emotions, so she taught me a
few exercises to keep them at bay.”
“Danny, I’m so sorry your birthday is so traumatic.”
“It’s
no big deal. Now you know why I don’t celebrate my birthday. It’s just
too much drama and too much of a hassle. So don’t bother planning a
birthday party for me. I’ll be just fine.”
“When was the last time you actually celebrated your birthday?” Cassie asked out of curiosity.
Danny shrugged. “It was the year before Grandmere died.”
Cassie was horrified. Danny’s grandmother had been gone for close to ten years.
She
watched as her friend dumped the contents of her mug into the sink and
left the kitchen. Visions of streamers, balloons, and birthday wishes
took root in Cassie’s mind, despite her friend’s protests. She was going
to give Danny a birthday extravaganza whether she liked it or not. She
just needed a partner in crime and she knew just the man to help her.
Tuesday, October 22, 2013
Starting From Scratch
For nearly a year and a half we have been living in the skin of our characters, Danielle Labouleaux and Aiden Stone, stars of The Body Hunters series.
We know these characters and their supporting cast so well, we know how
they would react in certain situations and can even complete their
sentences. Right now the third book in the series is with our editor
Reggie and we're in the midst of writing the fourth book. After we
release the fourth book, tentatively titled The Lazarus Effect, we're
taking a break from Danny and Aiden and starting another series. That's
where the problem lies.
One thing we've taken note of from our readers is that even though they love the mystery and paranormal aspects of our series, they love the drama between our characters even more. Therefore, we decided to delve into something that was strictly drama in a real world setting. We can promise that there will be plenty of twists and character conflict. The dilemma lies in creating characters who are not just Xerox copies of the cast from our first series. We're not going to cut any corners and we're not taking the easy way out.
Our new protagonist is a biracial young woman and that's where her similarity to Danny Labouleaux ends. We're purposely making her an edgier character who would do things to accomplish her goals that Danny would shudder to even consider. It takes a little work to take your brain out of one character and transplant it into another, especially when you've been in their mindset for so long. We've had a long time to develop Danny and figure out what makes her tick, now it's time to devote that same love and attention to another protagonist. While Danny and company feel like home, these new characters and scenarios have us in uncharted territory where we are free to start over from scratch. It may be a daunting task, but it helps us grow as writers.
Now we're not leaving The Body Hunters permanently, there's still a lot more stories to tell, as well as a prequel, and the movie script that's currently in the works. One day I'd love to see Danny and Aiden on the big screen. We're just taking a little time outside our comfort zone to develop something else and challenge ourselves. If it's not a challenge is it even worth doing?
One thing we've taken note of from our readers is that even though they love the mystery and paranormal aspects of our series, they love the drama between our characters even more. Therefore, we decided to delve into something that was strictly drama in a real world setting. We can promise that there will be plenty of twists and character conflict. The dilemma lies in creating characters who are not just Xerox copies of the cast from our first series. We're not going to cut any corners and we're not taking the easy way out.
Our new protagonist is a biracial young woman and that's where her similarity to Danny Labouleaux ends. We're purposely making her an edgier character who would do things to accomplish her goals that Danny would shudder to even consider. It takes a little work to take your brain out of one character and transplant it into another, especially when you've been in their mindset for so long. We've had a long time to develop Danny and figure out what makes her tick, now it's time to devote that same love and attention to another protagonist. While Danny and company feel like home, these new characters and scenarios have us in uncharted territory where we are free to start over from scratch. It may be a daunting task, but it helps us grow as writers.
Now we're not leaving The Body Hunters permanently, there's still a lot more stories to tell, as well as a prequel, and the movie script that's currently in the works. One day I'd love to see Danny and Aiden on the big screen. We're just taking a little time outside our comfort zone to develop something else and challenge ourselves. If it's not a challenge is it even worth doing?
Monday, October 7, 2013
Excerpt from The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied-Eric's Murder
Enjoy a snippet from the second novel in our series The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied. This is the murder of Eric Winston our suspect's first husband.
Eric Winston expertly trekked soundlessly over the rugged Alaskan terrain of Denali State Park. Mount McKinley, the highest mountain summit in North America, was in the backdrop, its snowy peaks stretching into the early morning sky. With the plush clouds and fluffy snowcaps, the breathtaking skyline looked like it had been painted by the hand of God. Denali State Park's scenery varied from lushly populated green forests to seemingly untouched icy tundra. Year round frozen glaciers jutted from the landscape like jagged shards of glass feeding into the cool channels and streams. Denali State Park was a nature lover's paradise.
Opting not to employee a guide like some inexperienced novice, Eric left camp at daybreak to explore the park. Not satisfied with the nature trails that catered to the tourist population of the park, Eric decided to walk on the wild side, literally. The temperature was comfortable, in the mid 60's, his sweat cooling off his body before it could accumulate. Eric was six foot tall, his body composed of lean muscle mass acquired from his active outdoors lifestyle. A mutinous mop of black hair covered his head and his eyes were the color of flint. His female fans on the blogs called him a heart throb. One zealous devotee even commented that he was a pretty boy, but the tangible type, not one of those Hollywood guys that needed makeup before they left the house. Eric liked the critique very much.
Today he was traveling light, dressed in loose fitting camouflage pants, a black long-sleeved t- shirt that clung to his upper body, and a hunter's orange hoodie. His lucky, well-worn Timberland boots protected his feet from toothy rocks and the roughened topography. Over his back he lugged a backpack full of health bars, water, his digital camera, batteries, and other necessary equipment, while on his left shoulder was a quiver full of arrows. He held his newly purchased compound bow in his hand, ready for his quarry.
For the better part of the morning he had been tracking a large, bull caribou. Being mid-August, he was just in time for caribou hunting season, and he wasn't going home empty handed. Eric kneeled, observing the fresh caribou tracks running along the stream. He cursed, having just missed the beast by mere minutes. The creature had stopped to drink from the stream before heading right back into the wilderness. Consulting his compass, Eric noted that the beast was headed east. He had been on the caribou's trail for awhile and wasn't going to lose him now.
Shifting the weight of his backpack and quiver on his muscled back, Eric followed the hoof prints. A stark white snow hare darted out of his path. Songbirds anointed him with their serenades as he entered the wooded area. Solid thickets of plant life impeded his travel, low hanging limbs from young spruce trees slapped him in the face, but he would not be deterred. This is the life he loved.
Eric Winston was the Wildman, or so he was called on his internet viral videos. He had started off filming some of his outrageous outdoor adventures and daredevil stunts, and the videos had become so popular he was nearly a household name. Taking advantage of his Harvard Business degree, the twenty-eight-year-old turned his love of the outdoors and extreme sports into a lucrative multimillion dollar enterprise. His was the face that graced bottles of sports drinks, outdoor equipment, and sportswear. His agent was even working out a deal for an MTV reality show. He had literally become his own brand. He was living the American dream.
A year ago he had finally met the woman with whom he wanted to share that dream. Amanda McDuff, or Crystal Rose as she was called during her stripping days, was now his wife. He had first met Mandy when he was out partying in Boston and visited a topless bar with some of his randy friends. As soon as Crystal Rose took the stage, Eric was immediately mesmerized and had to have her. Model tall with coffee brown, shoulder length hair and topaz brown eyes, Crystal Rose seemed to be looking right into his soul. The woman knew how to captivate the room, leaving every male in the bar drooling and ready to leave their wallets and credit cards with her. With her stunningly perfect breasts and even more perfect backside, Crystal Rose was exactly what men's fantasies were made of. With her first twirl around the pole, Eric was ready to throw her over his shoulder and lock her away in his apartment.
Instead, he waited around for her until the club closed. Sitting on the hood of his Porsche he was biding his time for her. At first she turned him down when he asked her out. But after three consecutive weeks of him showing up at the club on the nights she performed, Mandy finally relented.
Amanda was a Boston Community College Student, a computer programming major, stripping to pay her way through school. When they got engaged, Eric insisted that she give up her college aspirations to help with his career. She’d remained hard headed about the subject, refusing to give up her schooling, but things were about to change.
Two days ago they made it official and finally tied the knot. After a lavish private ceremony, he had spirited them away on a private jet to Alaska. To say that she didn't appreciate their honeymoon destination was an understatement.
At first she complained that she didn't want to sleep in a cold tent, let alone spending their wedding night making love on an air bed. After having to rough her up a little, Mandy let him have his way. She woke up complaining about the cold, and he was forced to get her straight again. Now that they were married, he wasn't going to be putting up with her nagging. She was going to do things his way, or else.
On his way out to hunt, she whined about bears and wolves in the woods, so he decided to leave her with his hunting rifle. The gun was probably too cumbersome for her, but it would stop her bellyaching. Besides, if any wolves or bears came around, she would probably be toast anyway.
Eric tried on a wry smile at the thought of her, the typical city girl, trying to survive an animal attack. He stopped short, spotting his prey in the next clearing. Like a ghost, Eric silently plucked an arrow from his quiver and pulled it back against the bow string, all in one fluid motion. He was envisioning having the caribou's head mounted on his office mantle as a wedding gift to himself.
A crack of thunder sent the startled caribou back into the woods. It was funny because the weather forecast hadn't predicted any rain at all. Eric started to look up and realized he couldn't move, but there was an agonizing pain in his back, like someone had ripped it open with a crowbar. Slowly he touched his fingers to his chest, to find them slick with blood.
There was another crack of thunder and he was face first on the forest floor, slowly slipping out of time and into eternity. The assailant stood over Eric and emptied two more bullets into the back of his skull for good measure. Stepping carefully around the body, the attacker headed back out of the forest.
Eric was dead, steam escaping from his body and dissipating into the cool, morning air. The scent of blood drew carrion crows who began feasting on the body. The crows scattered when a rogue grizzly bear approached. The bear nuzzled the body, before grabbing it by the leg and dragging it to its den.
Eric Winston expertly trekked soundlessly over the rugged Alaskan terrain of Denali State Park. Mount McKinley, the highest mountain summit in North America, was in the backdrop, its snowy peaks stretching into the early morning sky. With the plush clouds and fluffy snowcaps, the breathtaking skyline looked like it had been painted by the hand of God. Denali State Park's scenery varied from lushly populated green forests to seemingly untouched icy tundra. Year round frozen glaciers jutted from the landscape like jagged shards of glass feeding into the cool channels and streams. Denali State Park was a nature lover's paradise.
Opting not to employee a guide like some inexperienced novice, Eric left camp at daybreak to explore the park. Not satisfied with the nature trails that catered to the tourist population of the park, Eric decided to walk on the wild side, literally. The temperature was comfortable, in the mid 60's, his sweat cooling off his body before it could accumulate. Eric was six foot tall, his body composed of lean muscle mass acquired from his active outdoors lifestyle. A mutinous mop of black hair covered his head and his eyes were the color of flint. His female fans on the blogs called him a heart throb. One zealous devotee even commented that he was a pretty boy, but the tangible type, not one of those Hollywood guys that needed makeup before they left the house. Eric liked the critique very much.
Today he was traveling light, dressed in loose fitting camouflage pants, a black long-sleeved t- shirt that clung to his upper body, and a hunter's orange hoodie. His lucky, well-worn Timberland boots protected his feet from toothy rocks and the roughened topography. Over his back he lugged a backpack full of health bars, water, his digital camera, batteries, and other necessary equipment, while on his left shoulder was a quiver full of arrows. He held his newly purchased compound bow in his hand, ready for his quarry.
For the better part of the morning he had been tracking a large, bull caribou. Being mid-August, he was just in time for caribou hunting season, and he wasn't going home empty handed. Eric kneeled, observing the fresh caribou tracks running along the stream. He cursed, having just missed the beast by mere minutes. The creature had stopped to drink from the stream before heading right back into the wilderness. Consulting his compass, Eric noted that the beast was headed east. He had been on the caribou's trail for awhile and wasn't going to lose him now.
Shifting the weight of his backpack and quiver on his muscled back, Eric followed the hoof prints. A stark white snow hare darted out of his path. Songbirds anointed him with their serenades as he entered the wooded area. Solid thickets of plant life impeded his travel, low hanging limbs from young spruce trees slapped him in the face, but he would not be deterred. This is the life he loved.
Eric Winston was the Wildman, or so he was called on his internet viral videos. He had started off filming some of his outrageous outdoor adventures and daredevil stunts, and the videos had become so popular he was nearly a household name. Taking advantage of his Harvard Business degree, the twenty-eight-year-old turned his love of the outdoors and extreme sports into a lucrative multimillion dollar enterprise. His was the face that graced bottles of sports drinks, outdoor equipment, and sportswear. His agent was even working out a deal for an MTV reality show. He had literally become his own brand. He was living the American dream.
A year ago he had finally met the woman with whom he wanted to share that dream. Amanda McDuff, or Crystal Rose as she was called during her stripping days, was now his wife. He had first met Mandy when he was out partying in Boston and visited a topless bar with some of his randy friends. As soon as Crystal Rose took the stage, Eric was immediately mesmerized and had to have her. Model tall with coffee brown, shoulder length hair and topaz brown eyes, Crystal Rose seemed to be looking right into his soul. The woman knew how to captivate the room, leaving every male in the bar drooling and ready to leave their wallets and credit cards with her. With her stunningly perfect breasts and even more perfect backside, Crystal Rose was exactly what men's fantasies were made of. With her first twirl around the pole, Eric was ready to throw her over his shoulder and lock her away in his apartment.
Instead, he waited around for her until the club closed. Sitting on the hood of his Porsche he was biding his time for her. At first she turned him down when he asked her out. But after three consecutive weeks of him showing up at the club on the nights she performed, Mandy finally relented.
Amanda was a Boston Community College Student, a computer programming major, stripping to pay her way through school. When they got engaged, Eric insisted that she give up her college aspirations to help with his career. She’d remained hard headed about the subject, refusing to give up her schooling, but things were about to change.
Two days ago they made it official and finally tied the knot. After a lavish private ceremony, he had spirited them away on a private jet to Alaska. To say that she didn't appreciate their honeymoon destination was an understatement.
At first she complained that she didn't want to sleep in a cold tent, let alone spending their wedding night making love on an air bed. After having to rough her up a little, Mandy let him have his way. She woke up complaining about the cold, and he was forced to get her straight again. Now that they were married, he wasn't going to be putting up with her nagging. She was going to do things his way, or else.
On his way out to hunt, she whined about bears and wolves in the woods, so he decided to leave her with his hunting rifle. The gun was probably too cumbersome for her, but it would stop her bellyaching. Besides, if any wolves or bears came around, she would probably be toast anyway.
Eric tried on a wry smile at the thought of her, the typical city girl, trying to survive an animal attack. He stopped short, spotting his prey in the next clearing. Like a ghost, Eric silently plucked an arrow from his quiver and pulled it back against the bow string, all in one fluid motion. He was envisioning having the caribou's head mounted on his office mantle as a wedding gift to himself.
A crack of thunder sent the startled caribou back into the woods. It was funny because the weather forecast hadn't predicted any rain at all. Eric started to look up and realized he couldn't move, but there was an agonizing pain in his back, like someone had ripped it open with a crowbar. Slowly he touched his fingers to his chest, to find them slick with blood.
There was another crack of thunder and he was face first on the forest floor, slowly slipping out of time and into eternity. The assailant stood over Eric and emptied two more bullets into the back of his skull for good measure. Stepping carefully around the body, the attacker headed back out of the forest.
Eric was dead, steam escaping from his body and dissipating into the cool, morning air. The scent of blood drew carrion crows who began feasting on the body. The crows scattered when a rogue grizzly bear approached. The bear nuzzled the body, before grabbing it by the leg and dragging it to its den.
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Monday, September 30, 2013
Excerpt from The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied-Meeting the Cartwright's
Here's an excerpt from Book 2 in our series, The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied. In this snippet, our psychic detectives Aiden and Danielle meet with the grieving family of Jason Cartwright. Enjoy!
The JTC Technology Corporation campus occupied several hundred acres of San Jose real estate. The driver dropped Aiden and Danny off in front of the company's headquarters. For a few seconds they stood gaping at the sharp inclines and daring angles of the building's structural design which looked like some futuristic spacecraft from a science fiction movie. Security officers awaited them as they stepped into the expansive five-story complex. After signing the two of them in, giving them guest badges, and taking Danny's laptop out of her messenger bag and giving it a once over before giving it back to her, they were allowed to pass into the lobby.
Stepping into the headquarters was like entering a time machine into the future. The building's interior consisted of polished chrome, black marble and mirrored glass. Twin, glass enclosed elevators were located in the middle of the first floor, while a staircase that looked more like a glass art sculpture offered access to all levels of the building. The sun was nearly blinding, reflecting off the polished tile floor of the lobby. Since it was around lunch time, the atrium was hectic with activity. Mixed among the mundane sea of neutral office attire were what Danny assumed were the more relaxed creative geniuses in their brightly-colored classic cartoon and superhero T-shirts.
A man, no older than thirty of Asian descent was standing in the lobby near a large bronze sculpture of a hand holding a globe. His thin body was pretty much built like a stick figure, his polo shirt and khakis a couple sizes too large, hanging off his lanky frame. The smile he greeted Danny and Aiden with was as inviting as a bathtub full of ice cubes.
“I'm Carter Wu, lead software developer for JTC Technology. Welcome.” He said boringly as if they were stopping him from doing more important work. “If you come with me, I'll give you a tour of the facility.”
“I thought we were supposed to meet with the Cartwright’s?” Aiden spoke up as they started to follow.
Carter sighed and rolled his eyes, his tone of voice condescending. “Unfortunately, their board meeting is running a little late. By the time our tour is over they should be ready for you.”
Carter didn't sound very enthused to be doing what some would consider babysitting. With as much heart as an automaton, he gave them the abridged history of JTC Technology.
The company started in Boston, where Jason Cartwright a technological prodigy, was attending the Massachusetts Institute of Technology or MIT at the age of fifteen. He had programmed his first computer operating system at the age of sixteen. That same year, with his parents insistence he had started JTC Technology out of the family's garage.
Eight years later JTC was a highly successful Fortune 500 company. Though they were successful in the private sector with their computer programs and consumer gadgets, the bulk of the company's profits came from their contracts with the United States Defense Department. JTC did everything from create simulators where military recruits could enact crucial combat situations to supply electronics military personnel used on the battlefield.
They were given a full tour of the grounds, which included the Research and Development building located east of the main complex and the programming wing where computer programs were born. With the tour completed, Carter took them to the fifth floor of the headquarters where the board meeting was just ending. Sullen-faced board members were filing out as they approached
“Your guests, sir.” Carter snidely announced to Tim Cartwright, CEO and the victim’s father. “Would you be requiring anything else?”
Tim seemed to narrow his eyes on Carter as if silently reprimanding him and his unpleasant attitude. “It's alright, Carter, we can take it from here.”
Dismissing the software developer,Tim took Danny's hand in his own and kissed it. Aiden glared. He didn't approve at all! Jealousy reared its head in him, and all he could do was to keep glowering at the man. Tim Cartwright failed to notice.
Tim smiled widely showing off a set of teeth worthy of a tooth paste commercial. He was rakishly handsome, the type of man who only looked better with age. He was a few inches shorter than Aiden. His height and wide-shouldered build hinted at a previous athletic career, evident in his stance and the graceful way he moved. His dark hair was surrendering to gray with strands of silver mixed throughout.
He led them into the conference room where Barbara, or Barbie as she liked to be called, was waiting. She and Tim looked to have coordinated their attire, both of them dressed in black power suits. With the shake-up at the company and with their son the brainchild missing and presumed dead, Danny assumed they were trying to keep up a united front for the stockholders.
“Thank you so much for coming.” Barbie welcomed them, offering them a seat at the oblong mahogany table. She took a seat at the table's head with Tim to her right. Introductions were made all around with the Cartwright’s insisting on being addressed by their first names. Danny and Aiden also offered their condolences.
“Do you have a picture of Jason?” Danny asked.
Reaching into his jacket pocket, Tim produced a picture of his son and slid it across the table to Danny. Jason smiled back in the photo which apparently was taken on his graduation day from MIT since he was wearing his cap and gown. He was a good looking kid, a scrawny carbon copy of his father.
“Is it OK if I keep it?” She asked.
“Of course you can.” Barbie said with a nod.
“We really hope you can help us.” Tim's jovial expression had softened, his hands clasped in front of him. He looked to be on the verge of tears, worry lines creasing his brow.
“We'll try our best, Tim.” Danny sincerely offered.
“You two come highly recommended. What is your experience with cases such as this?” Barbie asked.
“Well I worked with both the New Orleans and the New York Police Department along with my brief experience with the FBI as a consultant. I also worked as a contractor with the Federal Government solving cold cases.” Danny said, offering her references.
“I served with the Marines for three tours in Afghanistan. After that I worked with the FBI for two years in their Criminal Investigation Division.” Aiden informed them.
“You were the one with Cassie when she was kidnapped by Gerard right? Weren't you his fiancĂ©e?” Barbie asked Danny. Upon hearing Gerard's name, she took a deep breath to answer, but Aiden spoke up before she could get a word out.
“Yes, she was, and I was the agent that rescued them.”
“Well then it looks like we're in good hands.” Tim observed, nodding to his wife. “Hopefully you can help us track down that woman our son was fool enough to marry.”
Danny looked confused. “I thought we were also trying to locate your son? He's still missing isn't he?”
Frowning, Barbie waved her hand indifferently. “At this point it's more of a recovery operation than a rescue. The authorities were only able to recover two bodies from the yacht's wreckage. They say we may never find Jason's body.”
“You try to protect your kids, but sometimes they just won't listen.” Tim hid his reddened eyes with the palm of his hand and started bawling. Supportively, his wife clenched his other hand.
Vengeance blazed in Barbie's eyes. “Whatever it costs to find that murderous bitch, we'll pay it. We'll give you access to our private jet, and we'll provide you a company credit card to cover any expenses you may incur. Whatever you need, name it and it will be provided to you.”
Danny and Aiden considered the offer to be quite generous, and they were able to come to agreeable terms with the Cartwright’s as far as their fee for their investigative services.
Curiosity got the best of Barbie. “Tell me, you two are working together, but are you lovers as well?”
Danny gave a sharp intake of air, the sound similar to someone suddenly letting the air out of a balloon. “What?”
Aiden stepped in for her, his tone stern and reproachful. “With all due respect, whatever our relationship is, it's between us. Danielle and I have worked well together in the past, and it will in no way affect how we work on finding your daughter-in-law.” Just because they were rich and paying for their services didn't give them the right to pry into their personal lives.
Barbie apologized profusely. “I'm sorry. I didn't mean to offend or be so forward. Since that business with Gerard and hearing that you were her rescuer, well there just seems to be a certain kind of chemistry between the two of you.”
“Please don't mention that monster's name again. It's over and in the past now.” Aiden said.
“Please accept our apologies. I can see that would be a very horrible memory. We didn't mean any harm, right honey?” Barbie nodded in agreement with Tim's statement.
“Apology accepted, Now if we can get down to business let's just focus on finding your daughter-in-law.” Danny changed the subject and opened her laptop ready to take notes. “What can you tell me about her?”
“She's a gold digging, white trash bitch. How's that for a start?” Barbie spat venomously.
“Ah OK, let's start with where did she and Jason meet?” Aiden clarified the questioning.
Barbie turned to Tim, and he shrugged. “I think they met when she was still married to Jason's friend. What was his name?” Tim snapped his fingers repeatedly as if it would help him remember. “What was his name…Winston? Eric Winston. I know for a fact Eric met her at a strip club where she was performing.”
Danny and Aiden exchanged a look. They weren't privy to that particular nugget of information.
“She was a stripper?” Aiden asked.
Tim nodded grimly.
“She killed him, you know. Shot that poor boy to death and left him in the woods. The animals had devoured him before his body was found.” Barbie informed them, snatching a handful of tissue from a nearby box and blowing her nose. “My poor son. We don't even have a body to bury. I swear she's going to pay for what she did.”
“I'm so sorry for your loss.” Danny offered, patting Barbie's hand.
Barbie sniffled and dabbed at her eyes. “It's OK darling.”
Tim had since composed himself. “She killed the Winston kid on their honeymoon. Good kid that he was. Jason felt sorry for her and offered to pay for Amanda's legal defense. The prosecutors didn't have enough to bring her to trial so they dropped the case. Next thing I know Jason is hanging around with this girl, and last week we find out they've eloped.”
“Eric didn't put her in the will as his beneficiary so his family contested her inheriting his millions. She didn't follow through with the legal battle because she got her hooks in another rich victim; my son.” Barbie said.
“I think the wise thing to do is start where it all began and track her from there.” Danny said to Aiden. “It's only been a few days. She hasn't gone that far.”
He nodded, turning to the Cartwright’s. “You said they eloped to Hawaii?”
“Yes. They were secretly married two days before the boat explosion.” Tim said.
“Jason and the girl used our private villa in Hawaii before the explosion. The police weren’t able to find any leads there and have given it the all clear. You two are welcome to use it. I'll have it prepared for your arrival.” Barbie said, taking her smart phone and rapidly sending a text message.
“That's fine. It may take a day or two, though” Aiden agreed. “We need to get back to Georgia, touch base with our government contacts and go from there.
After another twenty-five minutes of ironing out the details and arrangements, both of them caught the waiting Town car back to the hotel.
The JTC Technology Corporation campus occupied several hundred acres of San Jose real estate. The driver dropped Aiden and Danny off in front of the company's headquarters. For a few seconds they stood gaping at the sharp inclines and daring angles of the building's structural design which looked like some futuristic spacecraft from a science fiction movie. Security officers awaited them as they stepped into the expansive five-story complex. After signing the two of them in, giving them guest badges, and taking Danny's laptop out of her messenger bag and giving it a once over before giving it back to her, they were allowed to pass into the lobby.
Stepping into the headquarters was like entering a time machine into the future. The building's interior consisted of polished chrome, black marble and mirrored glass. Twin, glass enclosed elevators were located in the middle of the first floor, while a staircase that looked more like a glass art sculpture offered access to all levels of the building. The sun was nearly blinding, reflecting off the polished tile floor of the lobby. Since it was around lunch time, the atrium was hectic with activity. Mixed among the mundane sea of neutral office attire were what Danny assumed were the more relaxed creative geniuses in their brightly-colored classic cartoon and superhero T-shirts.
A man, no older than thirty of Asian descent was standing in the lobby near a large bronze sculpture of a hand holding a globe. His thin body was pretty much built like a stick figure, his polo shirt and khakis a couple sizes too large, hanging off his lanky frame. The smile he greeted Danny and Aiden with was as inviting as a bathtub full of ice cubes.
“I'm Carter Wu, lead software developer for JTC Technology. Welcome.” He said boringly as if they were stopping him from doing more important work. “If you come with me, I'll give you a tour of the facility.”
“I thought we were supposed to meet with the Cartwright’s?” Aiden spoke up as they started to follow.
Carter sighed and rolled his eyes, his tone of voice condescending. “Unfortunately, their board meeting is running a little late. By the time our tour is over they should be ready for you.”
Carter didn't sound very enthused to be doing what some would consider babysitting. With as much heart as an automaton, he gave them the abridged history of JTC Technology.
The company started in Boston, where Jason Cartwright a technological prodigy, was attending the Massachusetts Institute of Technology or MIT at the age of fifteen. He had programmed his first computer operating system at the age of sixteen. That same year, with his parents insistence he had started JTC Technology out of the family's garage.
Eight years later JTC was a highly successful Fortune 500 company. Though they were successful in the private sector with their computer programs and consumer gadgets, the bulk of the company's profits came from their contracts with the United States Defense Department. JTC did everything from create simulators where military recruits could enact crucial combat situations to supply electronics military personnel used on the battlefield.
They were given a full tour of the grounds, which included the Research and Development building located east of the main complex and the programming wing where computer programs were born. With the tour completed, Carter took them to the fifth floor of the headquarters where the board meeting was just ending. Sullen-faced board members were filing out as they approached
“Your guests, sir.” Carter snidely announced to Tim Cartwright, CEO and the victim’s father. “Would you be requiring anything else?”
Tim seemed to narrow his eyes on Carter as if silently reprimanding him and his unpleasant attitude. “It's alright, Carter, we can take it from here.”
Dismissing the software developer,Tim took Danny's hand in his own and kissed it. Aiden glared. He didn't approve at all! Jealousy reared its head in him, and all he could do was to keep glowering at the man. Tim Cartwright failed to notice.
Tim smiled widely showing off a set of teeth worthy of a tooth paste commercial. He was rakishly handsome, the type of man who only looked better with age. He was a few inches shorter than Aiden. His height and wide-shouldered build hinted at a previous athletic career, evident in his stance and the graceful way he moved. His dark hair was surrendering to gray with strands of silver mixed throughout.
He led them into the conference room where Barbara, or Barbie as she liked to be called, was waiting. She and Tim looked to have coordinated their attire, both of them dressed in black power suits. With the shake-up at the company and with their son the brainchild missing and presumed dead, Danny assumed they were trying to keep up a united front for the stockholders.
“Thank you so much for coming.” Barbie welcomed them, offering them a seat at the oblong mahogany table. She took a seat at the table's head with Tim to her right. Introductions were made all around with the Cartwright’s insisting on being addressed by their first names. Danny and Aiden also offered their condolences.
“Do you have a picture of Jason?” Danny asked.
Reaching into his jacket pocket, Tim produced a picture of his son and slid it across the table to Danny. Jason smiled back in the photo which apparently was taken on his graduation day from MIT since he was wearing his cap and gown. He was a good looking kid, a scrawny carbon copy of his father.
“Is it OK if I keep it?” She asked.
“Of course you can.” Barbie said with a nod.
“We really hope you can help us.” Tim's jovial expression had softened, his hands clasped in front of him. He looked to be on the verge of tears, worry lines creasing his brow.
“We'll try our best, Tim.” Danny sincerely offered.
“You two come highly recommended. What is your experience with cases such as this?” Barbie asked.
“Well I worked with both the New Orleans and the New York Police Department along with my brief experience with the FBI as a consultant. I also worked as a contractor with the Federal Government solving cold cases.” Danny said, offering her references.
“I served with the Marines for three tours in Afghanistan. After that I worked with the FBI for two years in their Criminal Investigation Division.” Aiden informed them.
“You were the one with Cassie when she was kidnapped by Gerard right? Weren't you his fiancĂ©e?” Barbie asked Danny. Upon hearing Gerard's name, she took a deep breath to answer, but Aiden spoke up before she could get a word out.
“Yes, she was, and I was the agent that rescued them.”
“Well then it looks like we're in good hands.” Tim observed, nodding to his wife. “Hopefully you can help us track down that woman our son was fool enough to marry.”
Danny looked confused. “I thought we were also trying to locate your son? He's still missing isn't he?”
Frowning, Barbie waved her hand indifferently. “At this point it's more of a recovery operation than a rescue. The authorities were only able to recover two bodies from the yacht's wreckage. They say we may never find Jason's body.”
“You try to protect your kids, but sometimes they just won't listen.” Tim hid his reddened eyes with the palm of his hand and started bawling. Supportively, his wife clenched his other hand.
Vengeance blazed in Barbie's eyes. “Whatever it costs to find that murderous bitch, we'll pay it. We'll give you access to our private jet, and we'll provide you a company credit card to cover any expenses you may incur. Whatever you need, name it and it will be provided to you.”
Danny and Aiden considered the offer to be quite generous, and they were able to come to agreeable terms with the Cartwright’s as far as their fee for their investigative services.
Curiosity got the best of Barbie. “Tell me, you two are working together, but are you lovers as well?”
Danny gave a sharp intake of air, the sound similar to someone suddenly letting the air out of a balloon. “What?”
Aiden stepped in for her, his tone stern and reproachful. “With all due respect, whatever our relationship is, it's between us. Danielle and I have worked well together in the past, and it will in no way affect how we work on finding your daughter-in-law.” Just because they were rich and paying for their services didn't give them the right to pry into their personal lives.
Barbie apologized profusely. “I'm sorry. I didn't mean to offend or be so forward. Since that business with Gerard and hearing that you were her rescuer, well there just seems to be a certain kind of chemistry between the two of you.”
“Please don't mention that monster's name again. It's over and in the past now.” Aiden said.
“Please accept our apologies. I can see that would be a very horrible memory. We didn't mean any harm, right honey?” Barbie nodded in agreement with Tim's statement.
“Apology accepted, Now if we can get down to business let's just focus on finding your daughter-in-law.” Danny changed the subject and opened her laptop ready to take notes. “What can you tell me about her?”
“She's a gold digging, white trash bitch. How's that for a start?” Barbie spat venomously.
“Ah OK, let's start with where did she and Jason meet?” Aiden clarified the questioning.
Barbie turned to Tim, and he shrugged. “I think they met when she was still married to Jason's friend. What was his name?” Tim snapped his fingers repeatedly as if it would help him remember. “What was his name…Winston? Eric Winston. I know for a fact Eric met her at a strip club where she was performing.”
Danny and Aiden exchanged a look. They weren't privy to that particular nugget of information.
“She was a stripper?” Aiden asked.
Tim nodded grimly.
“She killed him, you know. Shot that poor boy to death and left him in the woods. The animals had devoured him before his body was found.” Barbie informed them, snatching a handful of tissue from a nearby box and blowing her nose. “My poor son. We don't even have a body to bury. I swear she's going to pay for what she did.”
“I'm so sorry for your loss.” Danny offered, patting Barbie's hand.
Barbie sniffled and dabbed at her eyes. “It's OK darling.”
Tim had since composed himself. “She killed the Winston kid on their honeymoon. Good kid that he was. Jason felt sorry for her and offered to pay for Amanda's legal defense. The prosecutors didn't have enough to bring her to trial so they dropped the case. Next thing I know Jason is hanging around with this girl, and last week we find out they've eloped.”
“Eric didn't put her in the will as his beneficiary so his family contested her inheriting his millions. She didn't follow through with the legal battle because she got her hooks in another rich victim; my son.” Barbie said.
“I think the wise thing to do is start where it all began and track her from there.” Danny said to Aiden. “It's only been a few days. She hasn't gone that far.”
He nodded, turning to the Cartwright’s. “You said they eloped to Hawaii?”
“Yes. They were secretly married two days before the boat explosion.” Tim said.
“Jason and the girl used our private villa in Hawaii before the explosion. The police weren’t able to find any leads there and have given it the all clear. You two are welcome to use it. I'll have it prepared for your arrival.” Barbie said, taking her smart phone and rapidly sending a text message.
“That's fine. It may take a day or two, though” Aiden agreed. “We need to get back to Georgia, touch base with our government contacts and go from there.
After another twenty-five minutes of ironing out the details and arrangements, both of them caught the waiting Town car back to the hotel.
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Monday, August 12, 2013
How Much is Too Much?
Last week while in the midst of writing the third book of The Body Hunters Series we had the discussion of how far we really wanted to delve into our mythology. Though our series is about a pair of detectives with extraordinary abilities which they use to solve mysteries; at its heart our story is about two unique people working together while trying to sort out the difficulties of their relationship. What we had in mind was creative and would have made for an interesting story, but was it so far into paranormal mythology that it would turn off the readers?
As an example we referenced the HBO series True Blood. Though I'm late getting into the series, starting halfway through Season 5, the common complaint I hear about it is that they got too convoluted. People miss the earlier episodes when it was a scandalous supernatural tale about who hooked up with whom. I can say the same about a show I enjoyed during its first season ABC's Revenge. The first season was simple; a young woman with a list of names going after the people who wronged her. The second season of Revenge was too far removed from the simple concepts of season one. I gave up watching halfway through and to date have yet to even watch the second season finale.
Keeping these lessons in mind, we decided to scale back on the storyline we were planning. Though the storyline is still present, it's not an all encompassing plot like we originally planned.
While it would have been a compelling story with deeper supernatural elements, we listen to our readers first and foremost. Though our superfans enjoy the paranormal activity that brings our characters together, the thing they enjoy the most is the human connections and relationships. We don't want to alienate our readers by introducing concepts that are too out there. So using these TV shows as examples of what happens when you don't give your fans what they want, we decided to ramp up the drama and a little boom-chica for good measure.
As an example we referenced the HBO series True Blood. Though I'm late getting into the series, starting halfway through Season 5, the common complaint I hear about it is that they got too convoluted. People miss the earlier episodes when it was a scandalous supernatural tale about who hooked up with whom. I can say the same about a show I enjoyed during its first season ABC's Revenge. The first season was simple; a young woman with a list of names going after the people who wronged her. The second season of Revenge was too far removed from the simple concepts of season one. I gave up watching halfway through and to date have yet to even watch the second season finale.
Keeping these lessons in mind, we decided to scale back on the storyline we were planning. Though the storyline is still present, it's not an all encompassing plot like we originally planned.
While it would have been a compelling story with deeper supernatural elements, we listen to our readers first and foremost. Though our superfans enjoy the paranormal activity that brings our characters together, the thing they enjoy the most is the human connections and relationships. We don't want to alienate our readers by introducing concepts that are too out there. So using these TV shows as examples of what happens when you don't give your fans what they want, we decided to ramp up the drama and a little boom-chica for good measure.
Saturday, March 23, 2013
Aiden Stone FBI Special Agent
Please enjoy another short story on our hero from The Body Hunters and The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied.
The Body Hunters by Raven Newcastle http://www.amazon.com/dp/B009X971ME/ref=cm_sw_r_tw_dp_N6xQrb13R6TGQ … …
The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied by Raven Newcastle http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00CODG81Q/ref=cm_sw_r_tw_dp_r7xQrb0RWBN1N … … the fun continues in the sequel.
The Body Hunters: Paradise Denied by Raven Newcastle http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00CODG81Q/ref=cm_sw_r_tw_dp_r7xQrb0RWBN1N … … the fun continues in the sequel.
The chorus of a thousand cicadas surrounding him, child predator Chester scrambled through the marshes of the Florida Everglades. He was covered in swamp muck and the stink of his own fear, rivers of sweat pouring down his body. His heart jack hammered against his ribcage. Pushing through wild grass and reeds, the police bloodhounds howled at his back like the hounds of hell. He could feel the jaws of the law slowly closing in on him.
He
wouldn’t be caught, he couldn’t. Chester may not be the sharpest knife
in the drawer, but he knew he could not let the authorities catch him.
He knew what happened to men like him in prison. With his scrawny
physique, there was no way he’d survive life in prison with muscle bound
inmates with a penchant for taking their frustrations out on child
killers.
Chester
slipped into a grey puddle, while the FBI helicopter hovering over his
head like a hawk lost track of him. He nervously pulled himself out of
the marsh as discreetly as possible, mindful of the gators that resided
in the area. He turned his head to his left to see the flashlights
belonging to police and Feds getting closer. Chester escaped down a
path through the brush he’d been familiar with since he was an
adolescent. He smiled to himself as he eluded his pursuers.
FBI
Special Agent Aiden Stone was separate from the pack of law enforcement agents,
tracking his quarry on his own. A walking mountain of solid muscle,
Aiden was six foot four, his skin the color of damp Hawaiian sand, a
compromise of his native Hawaiian father and his biracial mother’s
heritage. A grinning skull that symbolized his
time with the Marines was tattooed on his right bicep. Ocean blue eyes
inherited from his Irish maternal grandfather were wide and searching
the area for the child murdering beast. Dressed in his Kevlar FBI vest,
t-shirt and jeans, Aiden large hand clenched a plastic charm bracelet
that belonged
to Chester’s latest victim.
After
the sixth child murder, two weeks ago by this particular serial killer,
the FBI was called in to investigate. Tracking serial killers was
Aiden’s specialty. Along with the usual detective skills required by the
Bureau, Aiden was also blessed or cursed with another set of skills; he
was a physical medium or psychic. By touching an object belonging to a
victim, he was able to access the memories attached to the item.
Through
his psychic forensics, Aiden was able to obtain evidence linking
Chester to the brutal crimes. With a warrant, they entered Chester’s
seedy apartment, finding all the evidence they needed to convict him,
but before the suspect could be arrested he’d attempted to abduct
another victim that very morning. Luckily the grade schooler knew all
about ‘stranger danger’ and was able to get away. The incident sparked a
county wide manhunt for Chester who’d vanished into the Everglades
after a high speed chase.
Aiden
kneeled, his black Timberland boots squishing the mud under his feet as
he ran a hand over his close cropped hair. Closing his eyes, he
squeezed the bracelet a little tighter in his fist. Like a television
that needs an antenna, he saw static at first and then the picture in
his head started to make sense, but still with interference. He closed
his eyes tighter, hoping that would make the image easier to decipher.
In
the spirit realm, the place between life and death, Aiden opened his
eyes. What he sees is still grainy, but he’s able to see the original
owner of the necklace; a seven year old girl with brown curls, still in
her Disney Princess pajamas and bare feet, the charm bracelet on her
wrist. They’re standing in the Everglades and the little girl is
pointing to a barely visible path and a triangular shaped boulder. A
small cabin can be seen in the distance.
“He took me down there.” The child informed him.
Aiden nodded, looking down on the child. “I’ll take care of this.”
The
little girl nodded her understanding and Aiden’s blue eyes snapped open
in the real world. The image of the path the little victim pointed out
is burned into his memory. In minutes, Aiden located the triangular
boulder and headed down the path.
Chester
has just reached his destination, nearly tumbling down the hill to the
small shack where his rusty pickup truck is parked out front. It would
take the police hours to locate the ramshackle cabin where he takes his
young victims and has his way with them before dumping their broken
bodies in dumpsters or roadside ditches. By the time the cabin was
discovered he’d be well on his way to Mexico. He shoved open the door,
ready to change into a clean set of clothes before making his escape.
The cabin contains ‘trophies’ from his young victims, connecting him to
each of the child murders over the past five years.
While
Chester was in the back of the cabin changing, Aiden stealthily entered
the premises, his flashlight and Glock handgun aimed in front of him.
His flashlight falls on the ‘trophies’. A toddler’s Crayola red
tricycle, a pair of tiny patent leather shoes, a child’s backpack, and
several other items belonging to victims are scattered throughout the
large room. Beside each item stands the ghostly, semi-transparent form
of the corresponding victim. Seven little victims filled the cabin for
Aiden’s eyes only, including the owner of the charm bracelet who was
standing directly behind him.
Pulling
a relatively clean shirt over his red hair, Chester stopped in his
tracks upon seeing the FBI agent in his hideout. Aiden levels his Glock
at Chester’s chest.
Aiden’s
baritone voice echoed in the nearly empty cabin. “Chester Drummond, you
are under arrest. I want your hands on top of your head NOW!”
Chester’s
eyes shifted from left to right as if considering his options. He
became skittish and antsy, like a cornered animal. His eyes are aimed
at the front door, his body poised to move.
Aiden didn’t miss a beat. “I said get your hands on top of your head! On your knees NOW!”
Instead Chester screamed, leveling a large plank of wood at Aiden.
The ex-marine easily blocked the attack with a large forearm, putting the perverted killer on his back. Aiden
stood over the twisted killer, weighing the option of putting a bullet
in his skull and ending things right here and sparing the taxpayers the
cost of a trial. He was an FBI agent after all and he could make up any
excuse he wanted as to why he had to shoot the suspect.
“Kill me. Please kill me!” Chester pleaded, his dirty grey eyes wide with fright as he looked up at Aiden.
Aiden
had nephews and the things this animal did to innocent children sent
chills down his spine. Leaning heavily on the side of vigilantism, Aiden
considered pulling the trigger, but the appearance of Chester’s ghostly
victims stayed his hand, the children were watching his every move. Sighing
heavily, Aiden shouldered his Glock and slapped the cuffs on Chester.
As
he was leaving the cabin with Chester in tow, FBI and police swarmed
the area, having gotten the call from Aiden before he entered the premises. Aiden
escorted the predator to other agents who took him off to a Bureau issue
Suburban.
Aiden walked over to his superior officer. “You may want the Crime Scene Unit to go over the cabin. It looks like he has trophies from his other victims.”
The older man nodded. “The forensic team is en route. Good job, Agent Stone. How did you find him?”
Aiden shrugged “Just a hunch I guess.”
Looking back to the cabin, he saw the ethereal forms of the seven little victims, who quickly dissipated into the night.
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